Transform Boundary
This is your paragraph(these boundarys are were the plates will move toghether. or they will slide past eachother or they can move from eachother. which is why the earth has diffrent shapes in the earth. Also when the plates move away from eachother and then one slips past the other it causes an earth quake occurs . And heres a cool fact when the pacific plate and the north american plate moved together the formed the san Andreas fult line in california.) in this are alot of mistakes including spelling, grammar, punctuation, ect. you should revise it.
DIVERGENT BOUNDARY
this is your paragraph there are again alot of mistake like the last one and some parts in both paragraphs don`t make much sense(theses boundarys are way diffrent then the others this proccess in when all the plates move away from eachother. So when these plates move they will cause some of the earths countries like africa and russia ec will move apart so thats why the earth looks like that. Also Divergient boundarys occur also in the sea they will spread the sea floor which is spreading of a divergent boundary. In the middle of the atlantic in the atlantic ridge is a good example of a divergent boundary.)Edit and revise.
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Winnie The Poo
12/13/2011 11:29:03 am
Marry poppins I really liked your pages but you had a little bit of grammer problems like "theses boundarys are way diffrent then the others this proccess in when all the plates move away from eachother. (space) Over all really good job. :)
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Mickey Mouse
12/13/2011 12:44:53 pm
Marry Poppins you did a great job but in both of you sections divergent boundarys and transform boundary you have to always REVISE becasue you started a sentence with no capital and check your grammar too but great job :)
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Mr. Hong
12/13/2011 02:55:26 pm
@ Hermonie - Good feedback!
@ Mary - Check your punctuation and grammar.
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