Information-You should add some info in all the sections.
Media-I think your media is relevant to the topics you are writing about. Maybe just add a couple more videos.
Punctuation-I think your punctuation is good I didn't really see any mistakes.
Spelling-I didn't see any spelling errors.
Capitals-I think your capitals are pretty good I only saw a few mistakes.
Overall great job.
Tips-Have all the words black I saw some green ones.
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Mickey Mouse
1/4/2012 08:50:13 am
Hi mary!
Media: I really liked how you put pictures for all of your rock sections and I liked how you put videos too so that was good.
Information :you need to have more information for all of your rocks sections and try to consentrate on your information and not always how it look so try to fix that but otherwise great job!
Capitals: In your metamorphic section in your third line you forgot to put a capital in because and you needed a capital because you started a new sentence but otherwise good job.
Spelling: in your sedimentary section on the second line you forgot to spell iam wrong you forgot to put the a that was just a little mistake I think you were just typing fast and you forgot to put the a but otherwise than that good job.
Grammar: your grammar was good just try to put more transition words don’t put the word and to start a new sentence.
Punctuation: I didn’t see any errors.
You did a good job!
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Dragon
1/4/2012 11:46:43 am
One suggestion is to title the section Igneous, also I would suggest you put the three sections of sedimentary on one page.
Spelling: You need a little bit of work on your spelling, but good job.
Capitals: You did an okay job but keep working on it.
Punctuation: Your punctuation is great keep up the good work!
Media: Your media is amazing! Great job!
Grammar: Your grammar is good but could use some work on the metamorphic section.
Great Job!! :)
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WINNIE the poo
1/4/2012 02:05:24 pm
Info: Mary great job on your info I thought that was just enough info good job on sedimentary, metamorphic and igneous rock.
Grammar: I thought your grammer was pretty good but you used some texting words like ". If u " other than that awesome job
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